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Going Shopping
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
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@aNaToLiS
We were whth my familie in Spa in Afyon, which is bigest Spa in Turkey.Ours Journey drive out go and return about tousand kilometers.
On the return we saw Shoes showroom, that direcktly buy from Fabric, and export to Germany. Fabric is near Izmir. And v ery good qualty and models.
And i am very carefull, when i choose Shoes. Ihave trying many pair of shoes.Seller Young boy was friendly and i keep the best one with good preis, and I have acknowlodge Seller and bend to car.
Submitted: 2008-07-10 10:39:25
The last time I went shopping with my family was at the Spa in Afyon, which is the biggest Spa in Turkey. Our journey to drive there and back was about a thousand kilometers.
On the return we went to a shoe showroom to directly buy fabric to export to Germany. The fabric was bought near Izmir, and it was a very good quality and make.
I am very careful when I choose shoes. I have to try on many pairs of shoes. The young seller was friendly and I kept the best one with a good price. I thanked the seller and went to the car.
Once I went to a Spa in Afyon with my family, which is the biggest spa in Turkey. It is about 1 thousand km between here and there.
On the return I saw a shoe showroom which supplies from Frabic directly then export to Germany. Fabric is close to Izmir and its product is always very good quality and models.
I chose the shoes carefully and tried on many pair of shoes. The seller who is a young was very friendly and finally I kept the best one with a good price. At last I acknowledged the seller and bent to the car.
I went with my family in a Spa, in Afyon, which is the largest Spa in Turkey. Our journey to go and to return, led about a thousand kilometers.
When we returned, we saw a shoe shop, they buy directly from the factory, and export to Germany. The factory is near Izmir.
The shoes are of very good quality and various models.
I am very careful when I choose shoes. I tried several pairs of shoes. The seller was a young boy very friendly. I chose the best and with a better price, and I got help from the seller to take up to the car.
This is the english I want to learn..Now i have BIG MOTIVATION in to english.from word to word i will check everything..Thank u again > Lorenne, Fruit,Valguiera
Hi Fruit, I can see you and I have read this exercise a little differently. I will wait to hear Anatolis' response so I can correct yours and I think mine also :))
Which thesaraus You use ? I will waiy Yours answer.. Becas (because) , I wanna see differences..
sorry..
http://www.wordreference.com/definition/
Lorraine:
The last time I went shopping with my family was at the Spa in Afyon, which is the biggest Spa in Turkey. Our journey, there and back, was about a thousand kilometers.
On the return we went to a shoe showroom, which buys directly from the factory and exports to Germany. The factory was near Izmir, and it’s products were of a very good quality and make.
I am very careful when I choose shoes. I have to try on many pairs of shoes. The young seller was friendly and I kept the best one with a good price. I thanked the seller and went to the car.
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Fruit:
Once I went to a Spa in Afyon with my family, which is the biggest spa in Turkey. It is about one thousand km between here and there.
On the return I saw a shoe showroom, which buys direct from the factory and then exports to Germany. The factory is close to Izmir and its product are always of a very good quality and makes.
I chose the shoes carefully and tried on many pair of shoes. The seller was young and very friendly and finally I kept the best one with a good price. At last I acknowledged the seller and went to the car.
Thank you！！！
We can say also The shoes are very good quality..Of ??? >>preposition we need here ore ??
However, if you are to use classical English with correct grammar you would write “The shoes are of very good quality”
of = from (in this sentence)
Can’t really explain better than that other than to say….I used to get in trouble at school for not using the word OF in a sentence like this :((
of=from here, I can understand.
Here I have another question:
I think Anatolis want to say there are also all kinds of shoes styles in the shoe showroom and "...its products were of very good quality and make", it means...the same information or...
For reference, to both yourself and Anatolis, we use "make" when referring to clothes, and "model" when referring to goods, such as cars or electrical products.
If dividing this sentence into two parts, one is "its products were of very good quality" and anther is "its products make good......what...styles?...or......
1/ The shoe showroom sells shoes of good quality.
2/ The shoe showroom sells good styles (makes) of shoes.
Wait.....I found some sentence in the oxford dictionary:
a coat of excellent makes
cars of all makes
What make of radio is it?
I choose only best tutors and friends, some nows me..Thank You for flowers=)
again grammer mistake..Reason i am now amateur in english.I use only same sentences..
But english and turkish grammer very important for me.. Same basal in..architecture.
please correckt errors, if U have time of course..See Ya ( You )> Ya is slang=))
Please, check the shoes make and if it´s an Elche make, you can say you bought the best shoes.
Sorry for my bad joke and my mistakes in English, I haven´t a good day; my mother in law is the guylty.
Rigourosly speaking, I see you have good commentators and better friends.
I always enjoy a lot your works.
See you.
Jose.
iTS AN HONOR.. Finally You came to Stadion.. Please send Ronaldinho..
Thank You for coming..Realy..Where u walk HUMOR AND CRACKS WALK WHIT you.. Of course i will read all cracks..first i must take some orange juice..Realy welcome..
By the way...'familie' is from German language...Do You also learn German? I got used to mixed the two of them up, too.
I know many online dictionaries but well I didn't know this one. Thx a lot!
This is one of my personal favourites:
http://www.answers.com
Cheerio! :)
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Hi Jose! Welcome to "Anatolis' World of English". So very happy you can join us here. We have been having a lot of fun here, as you can see!
Nice to see You here.. Yes i mix german and english, cocktail i like but ithink not for english learning.. Cheerio ja C'Ya . i never heard bevor in my life=?? never..
And Jose, ELCHE MAKE SHOES=) Please send with Cargo number 42.. Than i can say quality is good same ECCO... Yours mome gulty in court =)) he he i am laughing here, just a min i take cologne ( Kolnishwasser ..) he he >>thanks for HUMOR..
Jose is coming , i can jump from Balkon. Crazy humors..Sory i must drink Wather..
It is excellent to see Jose has come to join our group! But.... don't jump from the balcony!! >> hehehe.....quick drink your water!!!!
Of course i don't=))he he. Look Elche Elche ..
Elches shoes produckts never i hear in my life..
And court ??===)))
guilty = responsible for
Example: Ridvan is guilty of having too much positive energy =)))))
Welcome as friend..
On the return we saw the showroom of a shoe store that buys from the factory and exports to Germany. The factory was based near İzmir and the shoes were of good quality and make.
I am very careful choosing shoes and I try on many pairs. The seller was a friendly young boy and I bought the best pair on a good price. I thanked him and walked to the car.
Very good Anatolis :) Just be careful with spelling next time.
Thank You maple i will use seslisozluk, answer com, thinkmap visual dic, google translator, and i need also sometime asking in nativ grammer..See U..
Ridvan >> soon you have your own football team I think ;))
I'm from China where is very different to your country I think, and I have just started to learn French for two weeks as well :)
And do you know, Lorraine is also the captain in my team? :)
Take care, friends.
I´m agree too with Fruit and you, Lorraine would be our best captain and you could be our goalkeaper and manager.
The boss or president could be livemocha that joins people as good like you all.
Jose – mid fielder
Fruit – striker
Me – captain :)
Ridvan – goal keeper and manager
And our newest member - Maple – our defensive line
What do you think??? :)