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Describing People

Using both a positive and a negative attribute, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The man is not rich. He is poor.

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neptunus89
the woman is not young. She is old He is not a short. he is tall The boy is not fat. he is thin The girl is not tall. She is short You are not old. you are a young I am not a young. I am a old
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Submitted: 2008-07-20 20:29:45



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  • 2008-07-20 21:31:02
    sil
    Just a few changes:

    He is not short. he is tall.
    I am not young.  I am old.

    Very well done.  Good work....
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