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Directions

Pretend you are giving directions to a friend. Tell your friend how to get to your house from his or her house.

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nooonaaa
to come to my house; you have to come across the bridge;then you come through the street;besid the cofeshop
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Submitted: 2008-01-11 21:07:01



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  • 2008-01-13 15:49:59
    ree135
    this good but you have some mistakes
    do't write (;) this wrong
    you sall write(,) this is different
    to come to my house, you have to come across the bridge.then you come through the street.besid the coffeeshop.

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  • 2008-01-13 18:46:56
    rehab
    a good description
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  • 2008-02-13 16:51:12
    mona
    Good but why ";" after my house
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  • 2008-02-14 17:08:09
    rehab
    agood directions
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