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Describing People

She is thin. He is fat. He is tall. She is short. I am old. He is young. The boy is young. The man is old. The woman is old. The girl is young. The woman is tall. The girl is short. You are rich. I am poor.

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Submitted: 2008-08-19 16:34:31



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  • 2008-08-02 01:32:33
    Fredrik Wanger
    HI, Ngoc, this is better, I don't hear the letter "d" at the end of words clearly enough!  Fredrik
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  • 2008-08-02 02:17:27
    Dr. Thanh
    Good.
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  • 2008-08-02 04:26:11
    Ngoc
    Thank you Fredrik! I think I have to practice once, may be I will trouble you again, okay?
    Thanks!

    Thank you Dr. Thank!
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  • 2008-08-02 04:27:34
    Ngoc
    I am sorry! I write in mistake of your name, sorry!
    Thank you Dr. Thanh again!
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  • 2008-08-02 09:30:33
    oneworldenglish...
    Please Listen...
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  • 2008-08-02 09:39:37
    oneworldenglish...
    Please follow and practice this important exercise:

    Do this regularly with all kinds of texts, by yourself...
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  • 2008-08-02 09:41:58
    oneworldenglish...
    Cut off...

    Here's the rest...
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  • 2008-08-02 11:09:31
    Ngoc
    Thank you oneworldenglish!

    Thank you so much for recording comments for my exercise, yes, I will listen to them many times, then, I will practice again! I am happy can have you as my friend.
    Thanks again!
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  • 2008-08-02 14:16:43
    Adam
    Very good!
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  • 2008-08-03 02:09:04
    Ngoc

    Thank you Adam for reviewing and commenting!
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  • 2008-08-03 10:06:09
    normandiebelle
    Your reading was good and I agree with the helpful comments already offered to you - keep up the good work!
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  • 2008-08-03 10:15:38
    Ngoc
    Thank you normandiebelle!
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  • 2008-08-05 17:44:48
    Andreia
    Keep improving!
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  • 2008-08-19 17:30:24
    Fredrik Wanger
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    Hi, Ngoc, maybe Mike can help with your vowels!  Fredrik
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  • 2008-08-19 21:44:57
    Dev
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    Very good.  "Thin" and "short" need practice.
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  • 2008-08-20 01:43:23
    Ngoc
    Thank you Fredrik for reviewing again my exercise!

    Thank you Dev and every friend!
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  • 2008-08-22 04:37:25
    oneworldenglish...
    Ngoc,
    Where are your practice exercises?
    You are recording many new assignments but not submitting any homework?

    If you want to improve, you need to do the exercises here.

    Please don't move ahead with new speaking exercises until you have mastered the points I am asking you to improve.

    Thanks.

    Mike
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  • 2008-08-22 04:38:09
    oneworldenglish...
    if the exercise is too difficult or you don't understand - just ask!
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  • 2008-08-22 06:24:01
    Ngoc
    Thank you Mike! I am really happy can get your help. Thank you very much!

    I want to practice this exercise again after listened from your recording. I have done my homework every week. I just could not finish my exercise Dialog, Dialog also is a part of the homework, I could not practice the conversation Dialog because I did not have a partner to help me, I asked many friends, no one has time to help. I still have a few Dialogs have not finish yet.... I still hope any friend can help me.
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  • 2008-08-22 07:51:41
    Ngoc
    Dear Mike!

    I am thankful to you so care of my homework, but I really finish all my homework in writing or speaking in English 201, I still have the Dialog could not finish yet. Can I re-do the homework?

    I write the dates which I have done the homework in here, okay?

    Speaking:
    _A typical day-Before. After.About : July,10.2008.
    _Travel by plane-Distance : July, 21.
    _Landmarks and Nationality : July,10.
    _City Destinations: July, 24.
    _Wine Regions (re-do at) : July, 28.

    Writing:
    _Brief Introduction: July,11.
    _Favorite Meal: July,15.
    _Your family: July, 21.
    _Describe Yourself: July, 21.
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  • 2008-08-22 07:54:23
    Ngoc
    ...and the writing homework, "Your school": was at June,14.
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  • 2008-08-23 17:40:09
    oneworldenglish...
    Ngoc,
    Actually, I have given you many exercises to do. I am talking about the speaking exercises to strengthen and improve your speech. That is the 'homework' which I am referring to. I need to hear how you are doing in order to know if you are doing the exercises properly.
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  • 2008-08-23 18:00:40
    Ngoc
    I am sorry Mike!

    I really had listened many times from your recordings, but I still can not understand what you said in the recorder, I am sorry! Can you speak and also write on there too?

    Thank you very much!
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  • 2008-08-23 18:07:23
    Ngoc
    Again, sometimes, the net here is very bad and slow, it may stop during I listened from the recordings....So sometimes, I feel it is very hard for me to learn the "Listening". I am really sorry!

    Thank you for all your help!
    Ngoc
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  • 2008-08-24 08:12:48
    Ngoc
    Hi Mike!

    I am sorry for I made a mistake in the last comment, in your three speaking comments here, I just can not understand the first one only, I can understand the other two speak the lesson's comments of you. I have listened many times to follow the English sound from you. Every speaking or writing comment is very precious to me, I always look and listen over and over.
    Thanks!
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  • 2008-08-26 17:24:13
    Ngoc
    I want to practice...

    The man is tall. He is a manager. The woman is a housewife. She is young. The boy is a student. He is smart and a hard worker. The girl is young and pretty. you are talking on the phone. I am learning English.
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  • 2008-08-28 16:46:49
    oneworldenglish...
    This is a summary:

    /d/ at the end of words is not strong enough.
    Make it stronger in the words which start and end with /d/
    eg Down Old Duck Do Don't Did

    Slow down when you speak.
    You need to slow down up to 30-40%
    In this exercise you can learn to slow down.

    You need to make the vowels longer - much longer.
    This exercise will teach you to connect the end of every syllable to the beginning of the next syllable. This is a key skill for you to produce smooth speech.

    Don't worry too much about the reason for the exercise. Just do it. It will improve your speech automatically.

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  • 2008-08-28 16:52:07
    oneworldenglish...
    Good! your are sounding much much better.
    Please work on the /d/ sound
    You are saying /an/ instead of /and/

    Your Homework
    Practice "Donald Duck" 5 times or more for a few days - make the d very strong and loud.

    Then record an audio comment here.

    Cheers,

    Mike
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  • 2008-08-28 17:04:57
    Ngoc
    Thank you Mike very much!

    Yes, I will do my homework in here as you tell.
    Really thank you!
    Ngoc
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  • 2008-08-31 19:46:44
    Ngoc
    May I practice these words?

    old, cold, read, road, find, found, Donald Duck
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  • 2008-09-01 18:11:30
    oneworldenglish...
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    I'm sorry that's not clear at all.
    The /d/ sound is too soft at the end of words.
    You need to correct this problem immediately before moving on.

    Please try the following exercises

    Practice these then Read and Record them:

    /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/
    ant, and, ant, and, ant, and

    old,bold,cold,sold,mold,told,scold

    good, would, should, could

    food, mood

    word, herd, bird

    Please record here as an audio commnet

    Cheers,

    Mike
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  • 2008-09-02 19:09:01
    Ngoc
    /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/
    ant, and, ant, and, ant, and
    old,bold,cold,sold,mold,told,scold
    good, would, should, could
    food, mood
    word, herd, bird
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  • 2008-09-03 11:20:45
    oneworldenglish...
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    Hi Ngoc,

    I'm glad you are taking on the challenge of learning these sounds.

    What you recorded was supposed to be this:

    /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/
    ant, and, ant, and, ant, and
    old,bold,cold,sold,mold,told,scold
    good, would, should, could
    food, mood
    word, herd, bird

    What it sounded like was this:

    /ch/, /d/, /ch/, /d/(too soft), /ch/, /d/
    anch, and(good /d/), anch, and(good /d/), anch, and (good /d/)
    old,bold,cold, (These were good)
    (but all the rest are TOO SHORT)
    sol-le,mol-le,tol-t,scot
    goot, woot, shuut, coot
    foot, moot
    wardt, hart, bart

    These words all have a Beginning(the consonant), a middle (the vowel) and then an end (the consonant).
    You need to practice saying them in 'slow-motion' so that the vowel gets much more time.
    Make is 2 or three times longer (Then it would be normal length). BUT...
    you should practice 4 to 8 times longer to get it into your mind that your REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY need to slow down and lengthen the vowels when you speak English.

    for example...
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  • 2008-09-03 11:22:43
    oneworldenglish...
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    Sorry that was a typo...

    Make IT TWO or three times longer (Then it would be closer to normal length). BUT...
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  • 2008-09-03 17:02:01
    Ngoc
    Thank you Mike very much! you are really good to help. Sure, I have so many mistakes in the pronunciation, I am glad to have your speaking comments, I will try to learn it well. after listen from it, I will record again the exercise. Thank you very much!
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  • 2008-09-05 21:52:52
    oneworldenglish...
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    OK, I look forward to hearing your improvement!
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  • 2008-09-07 17:07:19
    Ngoc
    /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/, /t/, /d/
    ant, and, ant, and, ant, and
    old,bold,cold,sold,mold,told,scold
    good, would, should, could
    food, mood
    word, herd, bird
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  • 2008-09-08 02:33:35
    oneworldenglish...
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    Hi Ngoc,

    That's really great. You've got the d-sound

    Now it's time to work on the t-sound....

    /t/, /sh/, /t/, /sh/, /t/, /sh/
    /t/, /ch/, /t/, /ch/, /t/, /ch/

    tee tai taw too
    tai taw too tee
    taw too tai tee
    too tee tai taw

    Look forward to hearing your recording

    regards,

    Mike
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  • 2008-09-08 12:43:00
    Ngoc
    Thank you Mike!

    I am very happy to got you say I've got the "d" sound. But I know that I still have a lot have to continue following the pronunciation from you. Right? If you don't mind, I would like to record many recording again. Thank you very much!

    Ngoc
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  • 2008-09-11 17:31:07
    Ngoc
    aunt, t, t, t, t, t,
    wish, sh, sh, sh, sh, sh,
    teach, ch, ch, ch, ch, ch,

    /t/, /sh/, /t/, /sh/, /t/, /sh/
    /t/, /ch/, /t/, /ch/, /t/, /ch/

    tee tai taw too
    tai taw too tee
    taw too tai tee
    too tee tai taw
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  • 2008-09-11 17:38:27
    Ngoc