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Your Last Vacation

Describe your last vacation. Where was the last place you vacationed? What activities and sites do you recommend for other vacationers?

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Ricardo
The last place where I was on my vacation was a beach. It doesn't be a very special place, but it's great fun. There are other places where vacationers can go on the vacation. But difficultly the people will get to escape the beaches in Brazil. I recommend to go to Florianópolis or Bahia. They are wonderful places and have many different foods. The nature is beautiful and singular there.
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Submitted: 2008-01-17 16:39:53



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  • 2008-01-17 22:44:33
    Lauren
    "It isn't a very special place"
    "is not" is a simpler and more correct way to say "does not be (doesn't be). The key here is that you need "is" rather than "be" here. When you are saying what something is or is not, use "is."
    An example of using "be is"
    the commandment: Be still.
    "Be still" is an imperative.
    "Marth is still." Gives a detail about the person, place, or things.

    I tried my best to give an explanation! I hope I did not confuse you further. The more you work with English the more sense "be" versus "is" will be.
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  • 2008-01-17 22:47:12
    Lauren
    I like your description. Florianopolis and Bahia sound like great place to vacation at.
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