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Surprise Party
Gary Johnson went to work last Monday, as usual. He walked into the office, but nobody was there. He looked in the offices. He looked in the cafeteria. He looked in the employee bathrooms. He even looked in the basement. Gary didnt know what to do. He walked back to his office. The lights in his office were turned off. He turned on the lights and everybody he worked with yelled: Surprise! It was Garys birthday.
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Ricardo
Ricardo
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Other Members' Submissions
1. Your writing is nearly perfect.
2. Gary "didn't" know what to do. Didn't = did not.
3. It was "Gary's" birthday.
Speaking:
1. When you are saying a word that ends in "-ed", you are saying it as a separate syllable. You say "work-ed". But the way to say it is more like "work'd" Your spelling is correct, but it is not pronounced exactly as its spelled. Pretend like the "e" in "ed" isn't there.
Great job.