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Describing household objects.
Describe the objects in three rooms of a house. EX. The rug is in the hallway. A mirror is outside the closet. The kitchen sink is in the kitchen.
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Rocío Hyacinth macaw
Rocío Hyacinth macaw
My room is little, but I find it nice (maybe just because it's mine, I don't know). When you enter there the first thing you see is a big bookcase with four shelves. It's completely full of books. On its left is my bed, that is not too big but it's very comfortable. In front of it there is a chair and a table, on which there are a lot of things, specially (especially?) papers and pens, and some coins. There are also some CDs and a couple of books. I know I should tidy it up, maybe tomorrow I'll do it...
There is also a board close to the bookcase, with some Chinese characters written on it, these are the ones I still don't know but that I have already studied in class (so I should already know them :P)
Right now there are a couple of pictures on my bed, and a big folder full of papers and pictures made by myself. There is also a book written in English, but I don't remember its title.
I'd describe another room of my house, but, honestly, I think there is not enough space.
Submitted: 2008-08-18 23:00:13
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My bed, _which is not too big, .. (adds comment)
.. papers and pictures {drawn # painted # taken (photo)} by {me / myself (emphatic)}
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and it's easy for us to help you find the mistakes and help you get better.
very good.
my bed, that is not= my bed which is not
specially (especially?)= especially
is not enough space= is no enough space
muy bien mi amiga ;) , excellent! keep it up ^^