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Professions

Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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Marta
I am a secretary, I'm not a teacher. He is a manager, he is not a chef. She is a nurse, she is not a scientist. You are a a police officer, you are not a mechanic.
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Submitted: 2008-08-21 23:59:42



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  • 2008-08-22 01:23:38
    renato
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    Very good!
    Muito bem!
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  • 2008-08-22 01:37:08
    Lauren
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    Very good! 
    It is correct to use either "I am" or "I'm"; "He is" or "he's"; "She is" or "she's"; "You are" or "You're"

    Using the two complete words (such as "I am") is more formal.  But generally, both ways are accepted. 
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  • 2008-08-22 02:40:53
    pharmacyman444
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    is it your work or a copy???
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  • 2008-08-22 04:00:14
    Marta
    Renato, Lauren, thank you very much!

    pharmacyman444, it's my work lol
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  • 2008-08-22 04:08:32
    Esdaile
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    Perfect Marta! That was an excellent submission. Well done.
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  • 2008-08-22 20:19:54
    Marta
    Renato, Lauren, Esdaile, muchas gracias de nuevo. Me están sirviendo de mucha ayuda.
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  • 2008-09-08 00:10:31
    Avelar Jr.
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    Well done!
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