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• 2007-11-28 15:05:29

  Erik.
  

  Congratulations on completing this activity, it is quite well done!  I offer the following suggestions in the hopes that they will aid you in improving your writing skills:  (1) I like to sit down on a bench to read... or to enjoy the weather or to walk while listening to music on my ipod, (2)  The best is if I.  Best of luck with your future studies! 

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• 2007-11-28 15:12:51

  baronofthebean
  

  Excellent!  A few (very minor) corrections.
  
  (1) Erik's comment is valid, but you could also say "I like to seat (sit) on a bench(,) reading a good book and enjoying the nice season (weather), or to walk listening (and listent to) music from (from is correct, but people usually say on) my ipod (this is a proper noun, albeit an odd one: iPod).
  
  (2) Erik's second comment is right on the money.
  
  (3) It is very uncommon and generally viewed as extremely informal to end a sentence--and especially a paragraph--with an ellipsis (...)

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• 2007-11-28 15:37:22

  Zarig
  

  I love to walk in the park, especially early in the morning or late in the afternoon when it is less crowded. I like to sit on a bench and read a good book as I enjoy the nice weather, or to walk and listen to music on my ipod. Sometimes, I take (draw/paint) pictures. I am a painter and these moments/objects are of much importance to me. I can also relax and reflect on my work and my life in general. The best of all settings is a walk in a seaside park. THere, I love listening to the waves; but of course, that makes things more difficult for me.
  
  [The beauty of the English language is the variability it offers in the expression of thoughts into words, sentences and paragraphs. Of course, this needs a good vocabulary, sound grammar and useful punctuations. Practice makes perfect.]
  Zarig.

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