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Describing Objects

Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

Yesterday morning i was reading stories and playing game'S. In the afternoon i was waching T.V.
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Submitted: 2008-01-23 16:35:20



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  • 2008-01-23 18:09:40
    Bart_Czyżewski
    ...games...
    ...watching...

    Nice job ;)
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  • 2008-01-24 15:27:28
    Flávio Ivashita
    Hi Iara Jordan. 
    Well, I am learning too. 
    But, I think you write very well. 
    Only not "waching" but "watching" is correct, ok?
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  • 2008-04-30 11:32:36
    Challenge
    well done
    Yesterday morning I was reading stories and  playing games. In the afternoon I was watching TV.
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