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Going on Vacation
Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
Author:

eddie

eddie
There are something around me. A computer is in front of me, and my roomate is behind me!
Submitted: 2007-11-29 13:53:45
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2007-11-29 23:30:14aqua
I think you did not answer the question. try this one: "I usually go to work by train but sometimes I take the subway. On weekends, my roomates and I go to the mall and watch movies and shop." -
2007-11-30 16:46:48eddie
Thanks ,,,
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