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Surprise Party

Gary Johnson went to work last Monday, as usual. He walked into the office, but nobody was there. He looked in the offices. He looked in the cafeteria. He looked in the employee bathrooms. He even looked in the basement. Gary didnt know what to do. He walked back to his office. The lights in his office were turned off. He turned on the lights and everybody he worked with yelled: Surprise! It was Garys birthday.

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florence
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Submitted: 2007-09-05 21:16:48



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  • 2007-09-06 01:50:22
    Erik.
    Quel bon début!  Je suis impressionné.  Les deux petites fautes que j'ai entendues sont les suivantes:
    (1)  walked avec un "ed" trop accentué et (2) un h prononcé avant "office" et autres voyelles.

    Continue!  Et j'espère que le site te permet d'améliorer ton anglais comme tu voudras.

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