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Describing Hairstyles

The old man is bald. The young man is not bald. She has black, curly hair. I have long, brown hair. The boy does not have red hair. He has blonde hair. The man has a red beard and a moustache. The woman does not have a beard. She has short, black hair.

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Submitted: 2008-02-05 22:46:32

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2008-02-06 08:08:17
hcddavis76

I mostly understood your response. When you say "shopping" you should enunciate more. Shah-pping instead of Show-ping.

Also you shouldn't say "I will go to shopping.." You are using a action verb in place of a noun. Instead try, "I will go shopping tomorrow" or "I will go to the mall/store."

Hope this helps.

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