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Introduce yourself! Write a brief introduction. What is your name? Why are you learning a new language? Where are you from?
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nhatnam
nhatnam
Hi, everybody
My name is NhatNam, the name combines two tones Nhat and Nam of vietnamese's tongue. It means sunshine on the south. I am living and working in VietNam.
I am an agency officer and one of many other members at Beauty Salon. That is a trade mark's aesthete to make beautiful service in the center of SaiGon city. Everyday, we have to contact more customers with no less foreign people of many countries over on the world. I must need to know some foreign languages to relate easy with everyone and comfortable for my job.
Submitted: 2008-04-25 11:02:19
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Nice to meet you :). My comments are below. Please kindly check. Bye.
1) My name is NhatNam and i am twenty five years old.
2) i live and work in SaiGon, VietNam.
3) hmm, it is complicated for me, sry.
4) I wanted to learn English because it became very common around the world.
5) I could not get it. sry.
6) Nice ending. I share your ideas.
My name is NhatNam, i am twenty five years old. I live and work in SaiGon, VietNam. Nowaday, the language is not barring of the relationships between the persons with others, and it became very common around the world. I like to learn English.
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Estoy viviendo en Mêxico en una ciudad llamada Linares Nuevo Leôn.
ME inscribi en livemocha para apreder inglès.
Entiendo perfectamente tu escrito, pero me es dificil verificar la ortografia.
mil saludos y nos vemos por este medio
Luis Lauro
"I don't know how the old contents my submission (first) suddenly evaporated !"
good luck..
corrections:
Nowadays, English is used by many people around the world. Therefore, it is one of the foreign languages necessary to communicate with others, whether for studying, business, etc.
keep up the good work!
English has become
what did you want to say with the word necessarily?its and adverb of manner
It is necessary. I mean English?? to do things? to study to do business,
"Therefore, it is one of the foreign language necessarily to enlarge the relationships: study, business, so on... I come from VietNam."
I will harder study than.
Thank you!
I received friends' upholding so!
_In a sentence but two clauses, two subjects different I and language. Can it be wrong!
"My name is Tran Van Ut. I am a Viet-Nam national. I must learn another language, other than my native one. Why is it necessary? For me, it is necessary to communicate with people all over the world.
I will try hard !
but It Is hard for me to under stand the meaning of ( One opening learn a new language ),there are an easy way to say the same meaning with simple words
but It Is hard for me to under stand the meaning of ( One opening learn a new language ),there are an easy way to say the same meaning with simple words
In think the sentence begins with subject, verb and then object.
One opening(n)=good opportunity, one occasion... They 're not different!
_One(adj)=only(adj), most(adj).
_National(adj, n)=nation(n)=nationality(n)but each value means near same. I can confused!
i).Name.ii).Name of Father.iii).Name of City & Country. iv).Nativew Langage.v)Qualificaion. vi).Profession. vii).Name of language you want to learn. viii). Reason for learning.
아주 잘 했어요.
Hope do it better.
I don't know somewhat about grammar what occured error to repair them. Sorry, even you came here silently too!
Next, many country -> many countries
Let's go ahead together!
My name is NhatNam, which is beautiful combination of two tones i.e. "Nhat" and "Nam".
Nhat means "day"in chinese or "a sun"
Nam means "on the south" or we can understand its meaning is "warm". Ok?
(I am very happy from all your attentions)
My name is NhatNam and I'm 25 years old. My name is a combination of two Vietnamese' words that mean, "Sunshine on the south." I'm currently living and working in Saigon, Vietnam. I'm an agency officer and one of many other employees at Beauty Salon, which is located in central Saigon. Their high standard of excellence and appreciation for beauty, is the company's trademark. We do business with customers from all around the world. Therefore, knowing a more than one language is not just a good thing, it's a must!
Take care,
Crashish
"Therefore, knowing more than one language is not just a good thing, it's a must!"
Take it easy,
Crashish
I am a vietnamese, so my express in grammar was still confused following grammar of the native language."Therefore, knowing a more than one language is not just a good thing, it's a must! " That is a strange case for me now !
GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!
"to relate easy" should be "to relate easily" because easy is an adjective, you need a adverb to go after the verb.
Example:
Not correct: He walks slow.
correct: He walks slowly.
I hope this helps.
Chao` tam biet.