English Writing Exercise

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?


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I live in Russia! Russia! One could hardly find a person in the world,who has never heard about it! Russia! Rossiya!
Some people (especially foreigns) don't like it,or,maybe, can't understand us,the Russians?
Yes,we are very strange people,very unpredicatable,unruled,but at heart-kinda like kids:very funny,outgoing, a bit naughty,disobedient;
in general-kind,loyal,royal,loving,very devoted,exatic and risk-takers!
Every time I hear it's name 'Rys', my heart starts missing a bit!
I'm very proud of my country. From the bottom of my heartI thank all my fellow countrymen for everything we have done!
No matter,who lives in the north or in the south,-ALL PEOPLE ARE WONDERFUL!
I bet,people from the other planet are not less wonderful.
Lets live in peace!
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  • JAMES
    Mochapoints: 947  |  Teacher Score: 702 (0%)
    Great ! I agree with you. Lets live in peace! Good luck!
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  • Olekander
    Mochapoints: 30188  |  Teacher Score: 15872 (94%)
    Interesting and grammatically perfect! very good. "Foreigners" is the only mistake have fun!
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  • cuppachino ɐddn...
    Mochapoints: 15192  |  Teacher Score: 8602 (100%)
    especially foreigns ► especially foreigners or,maybe, can't understand us ► maybe can't understand us ("or, maybe" is redundant) I hear it's name ► I hear its name it's = contraction of "it is" its = possessive for it Not sure what you meant by "exatic." Perhap you meant "exactic" in which case the word you want is "precise." You might have meant: "exotic"? my heart starts missing a bit ► my heart skips a beat (The heart stops BEATing momentarily. Beat is the verb you want here. It's also the noun for a cycle of the beating. "Bit" means a very small portion/fragment.) a space is required after colon and comma. Lets live in peace! ► Let's live in peace! ("let's" is a contraction of "let us") ("lets" is the third person singlular present tense for the verb "let") That's my sentiment exactly. Bravo, Rina! Since I first discovered this site, I've deemed its community as unique and unmatched. The highly motivated crowd of linguistic learners and experts alike, naturally coincide with the demographic group which is: international-minded, intellectual, adventurous and friendly. Incidentally, as one starts learning languages and cultures, immunity against xenophobic deceases builds, and there's no turning back. On behalf of appreciative Mocharians everywhere, I'd like to take this opportunity to thank LiveMocha for its valuable service to humanity.
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  • man_raid
    Mochapoints: 5008  |  Teacher Score: 2440 (100%)
    good keep on this level
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  • An Indian
    Mochapoints: 4034  |  Teacher Score: 3179
    Excellent Rina! good practice , keep doing it! I agree with Cuppachino! he's right. Thanks All the Best!!
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  • english_1
    Mochapoints: 3570  |  Teacher Score: 2232 (60%)
    Cuppachino corrected all your mistakes!
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