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I'm so sorry because I will not introduce myself as the request of this text.I just want to share with you about my feeling about a story that I can't find any subject here to write it down.There are 2 person with 2 different personality,one is"hot",the other is"cool".The "hot" boy like the bright and warm sun.The "cool" boy like the soft and cool moon.When they are your friends,when you go with them,you just think that you are the most lucky girl on the earth.But if you are more lucky,if 2 boys like you.Who is the one you will choose?The sun or the moon?Fuu,the main character of the manga"Parfait Tic",the lucky girl in this story,chose Daiya,the "hot" boy with a shining smile.The "cool" boy is Ichi,the boy has a cold look but a warm heart inside.The love story of Fuu is very complicated;if you want to know,try to read it;but finally she chose Daiya.....If I were her,I would not do that.I really like Ichi more.I don't hate Daiya,who can hate the sun?Daiya always makes Fuu laugh,always makes Fuu be joyful.
Submitted: 2008-03-04 22:37:48
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But...it's just my feelings.I'm not Fuu,I'm not the author of the manga to let Fuu and Ichi be together.I'm just a fan of manga,a fan of "Parfait Tic",and a fan of Ichi.I wish I could have a friend like him,the moon of mine...<*-*>
I think you are very..romantic^L^
You can read on onemanga.com,but the next vol is not completed
The book is interesting and heros are handsome.^^*
I like Ichi better than Daiya.
Because I like cool type boy.kiki
Anyway,your contents is very interesting.^^
I want to read more:(((((((((
For your example though, I agree, I would say it is better to have a warm heart all the time, than to have a warm smile some of the time. With age all things fade, and a beautiful bright smile will disappear to wrinkles and time, but a beautiful heart will only grow richer with affection and endearing passion over time. An egg, no matter how much it is painted, will always be an egg, with the same insides... but if you can find an egg with a special quality or taste inside, it doesn't matter what the shell looks like. The quality speaks to a reasonable mind; the shell speaks to the shallow mind. ;)
www.youtube.com/watch?v=dxt_9bEplBs
the best moments of Fuuko and Ichi Shinpo*-*
But there are some things worth to mention.
Line 3. please use the plural - persons
Line 4. also plural - personalities
Well done.
I would love both, do you like the same me, babyrosy?
so it full write very good ^^
so i celebrate you carry on move ~~~^~^hehe~~~
so about me,i am not speak english well.i hope to chat with some english speakers to improve my english.can you give me a hand .
but girls always love boys who make them laugh actually!!!
Maybe you got a fantasy dream that makes you be wrong to detect the big difference between the moon and the son.
I am really want to know whether you are a real girl or ....