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When and where?

Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

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john_robinson
Every night, my familly usually watch TV. That is the time for the members of my familly to get together.
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Submitted: 2008-05-05 06:54:39



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  • 2008-05-05 19:43:55
    Derycky Unhee
    Good!

    I found no mitakes
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  • 2008-05-05 23:21:41
    loukal
    great , but you need to developpe more your ideas
    good luck
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  • 2008-05-06 01:40:26
    Chynna
        Every night, my family usually watches TV. That is the time for the members of my family to get together.
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  • 2008-05-06 13:13:36
    Aisha
    good!
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