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C Blackman
Je suis un ergotherapiste qui travailler dans le Nord du Canada. je m'appelle Craig. Je suis trent-six an et jai a un jeune fille. Elle est trois et demi.
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Submitted: 2007-09-12 04:26:19



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  • 2007-09-12 21:23:48
    Erik.
    Great start! Cultural note: There are still very few "ergothérapeutes" in France, under 5,000! Also, according to the net, it is a career dominated by women. Grammatically, this is quite complex already! Especially the use of the relative pronoun, "qui." Bravo! Careful, however, to never use an article with professions ("Je suis ergothérapeute") ; always conjugate your verbs ("qui travaille") ; expressing age ("j'ai trente-six ans" / "elle a trois ans et demi") ; and gender ("une jeune fille"). Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more from you!
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  • 2007-09-24 23:23:45
    JP
    Merci Craig, très bien! Bonne réponse, on comprend tout. Mais tu as oublié de nous dire pourquoi tu apprends une autre langue! Voici une version corrigée de ton texte: "Je suis ergothérapeute au nord du Canada. Je m'appelle Craig. J'ai trente-six ans et j'ai une jeune fille. Elle a trois ans et demi."
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