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Mandarin Chinese Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 2

Describing Objects and their Locations

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

nèi gè yǒu qián nǔ rén de lán sè qián bāo lǐ yóu yī xiē jīn bì 。 nèi gè pín qióng nán rén de hèi sè pí jiā zi lǐ yóu yī xiē yín bì 。 nèi gè nǔ hái yǒu xiān huā hé táng guǒ， dàn shì nèi gè nán hái yǒu yī zhī xīn de bǐ hé yī běn jiù shū。 nèi gè bái sè de hé zi zài shā fā shàng ，nèi zhǎn lù sè de dēng zài zhuō zi shàng 。 nèi gè nǔ hái zuò zài jú sè yí zi lǐ ， nán hái zài zhuō zi páng biān。

那个有钱女人的蓝色钱包里有一些金币。那个贫穷男人的黑色皮夹子里有一些银币。那个女孩有鲜花和糖果，但是那个男孩有一支新的笔和一本旧书。那个白色的盒子在上方上，那盏绿色的灯在桌子上。那个女孩坐在桔色的椅子里，男孩在桌子旁边。

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  • Dawn
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    Wow! Perfectly!
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  • Alanlancs1
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    Thanks Dawn.  I appreciate your comments. Your English is sounding really nice

    bye

    Alan
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  • Rickjid
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    这个写的不错，没有错误
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  • David
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    说得不错，只是“绿灯，橙色”的发音要注意。
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  • Eve
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    很好
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  • Meng Wang
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    very good
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  • chenmo
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    “穷” “ 糖”  “支”的发音稍微有点问题，其他不错，加强练习，速度再稍微快一点就更好了！加油！ 
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  • ailsa gan
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    Good.Sorry,I can`t hear your voice,so I just give you two in pronounce.
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  • Eve
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    好棒哦
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  • fangfangmiriam
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    这个有钱女人的手袋里有金币，那个穷男人的黑钱包里有银币；这个女孩口袋里有糖果、手上有鲜花，那个男孩有一支新钢笔和一本旧书；这个白色的盒子放在沙发上，那盏绿灯放在桌子上；这个女孩坐在一把橙色的椅子上，那个男孩坐在一张桌子旁边。
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  • youngjia
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    写得不错！
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  • Clpmary
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  • Clpmary
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    Hi, Alan, I`m sorry that I do not know the pronunciation of those names. >0<
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  • T-Mo
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    practice more and you will be better .

    well-done.
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  • Lianchunbao
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    相当不错了，挺好的。
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  • Amy
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    very good

     
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  • xuanyi
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    very good!
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  • cnbaobao
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    really good.

    rich woman andd poor man.
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  • 维尼
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    总得来说很不错的，只有个别的几个音没发准，比如新（xin），支（zhi)
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  • Oscard
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    *綠燈放在桌子上。 女孩坐在*橙色椅子上，男孩坐在桌子旁邊。

    Hello, I'm Oscard. your writing is good. but it is just a little bit wrong in  "*綠燈*橙色".

     
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  • claud he
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    It's good.One thing you have to pay attention is the tempo and the fluency.I believe you can do well in future by your hard working.
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  • D E X T E R
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    Good work!
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  • V {独孤求败}
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  • zhulou
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    好，有创意！好样的，加油！
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  • zhulou
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    不错，继续努力！
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  • spoken
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    某些字的音调要注意哦~
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  • gxdbeanbeaneye
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    Perfect.I think you have made more progress in your Chinese oral job. Meanwhile, you also should exercise your tongue more to correct and perfect your tone, for instance, 女人.

    OK, good luck.

    Bye.
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  • xinyi
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    it's good
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  • mark
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    非常棒！加油！
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  • Alanlancs1
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    thank you to everyone! Your feedback is really encouraging for me!
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  • chengjun
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    excellent
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  • Jennifer
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    一支(yi1 zhi1)       新钢笔 (xin1 gang1 bi3)    旧书 (jiu4 shu1)    绿灯(lv4 deng1)   橙色 (cheng2 se4)    桌子(zhuo1 zi)
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  • Bluce-Wu
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    You improved your chinese so quickly .Well done! practise more ,please!
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  • sophia
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    super!
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  • 程美
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    那个白色的盒子在沙发上
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  • An old camel
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    那个白色的盒子在沙发上。
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  • moukyou
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    good!
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  • sophie
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    加油，I'm Sophie~
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  • 徐婧男
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    你太棒了！我要向你学习你学习中文的毅力很恒心
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  • sunny
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    Camping wild is a wonderful way to experience the natural world and ,at its best, it makes little environmental influence. But with increasing numbers of people wanting to escape into the wilderness, it is becoming more and more important to camp unobtrusively(不引人注目地)and leave no mark.

    Wild camping is not permitted in many places, particularly in crowded lowland Britain. Wherever you are, find out about organizations responsible for managing wild spaces, and contact them to find out their policy on camping and shelter building. For example, it is fine to camp wild in remote parts of Scotland, but in England you must ask the landowner’s permission, except in national parks.

    Camping is about having relaxation, sleeping outdoors, experiencing bad weather, and making do without modern conveniences. A busy, fully-equipped campsite(野营地)seems to go against this, so seek out smaller, more remote places with easy access to open spaces and perhaps beaches. Better still, find a campsite with no road access: walking in makes a real adventure.

    Finding the right spot to camp is the first step to guaranteeing a good night’s sleep. Choose a campsite with privacy and minimum influence on others and the environment. Try to use an area where people have obviously camped before rather than creating a new spot. When camping in woodland, avoid standing dead trees, which may fall on a windy night. Avoid animal runs and caves, and possible homes of biting insects. Make sure you have most protection on the windward side. If you make a fire, do so downwind of your shelter. Always consider what influence you might have on the natural world. Avoid damaging plants. A good campsite is found, not made—changing it should be unnecessary.
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  • 姗姗
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    hei黑 tang糖 Alan, please pay attention to the tones of these words.
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  • jiange1310
    Mochapoints: 1968  |  Teacher Score: 271 (0%)

    wow,extraordinarily.you oral Chinese is perfect.but i think you should talk to native speacker or watch Chinese movie.you can write to me,i will try my best to help you.my email is ----jiange1310@126.com----
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  • Gordon
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    Livemocha Expert EXPERT REVIEW (What is this?)

    Hi, Alan, you have done a great job with this reading.

    Your accent is very nice. Your voice is pleasant to hear.

    Let's work on only one  word. Please read after me:

     

    鲜花

     

    I am going to record the passage for you to use as reference.

    那个有钱女人的蓝色钱包里有一些金币。那个贫穷男人的黑色皮夹子里有一些银币。那个女孩有鲜花和糖果，但是那个男孩有一支新的笔和一本旧书。那个白色的盒子在沙发上，那盏绿色的灯在桌子上。那个女孩坐在桔色的椅子里，男孩在桌子旁边。

     

    继续努力，你的汉语会更好！
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